Tuesday, May 2, 2017

A Troubled Mind: A Short Narrative

https://youtu.be/SDRq6uX40iw

12 comments:

  1. Love the music choice. Great acting too and you can feel the emotion.

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  2. I really liked the feet shot, it added suspense.

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  3. Very good story telling, you did well at showing the emotion in it as well.

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  4. I fear the day when my kids are teenagers. I know it's crazy, but you said this is based on a true story - it gives me hope that they can be reasoned with.

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  5. The dialog didn't seem natural or sincere. But the father's creeping was a great touch!

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  6. I enjoyed the little details, like the picture of your stepson in the background when you sneak back towards the room or when you touch his knee before you leave again, which makes it feel very authentic. Also the music fits perfectly to the theme of your video!

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  7. Beautiful tone. The music was very appropriate. I like the shot with the basketball picture in the background. The script/dialogue is awesome and really helps tell the story of how these two people interact. The son does a great job acting but he definitely needs to clean his room ha!

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  8. Nice problem solving, m8! :D Yeah some the shots had some issues, but I liked it. Everything was in place, a little more attention to editing, some shots could have been cut earlier. Overall great job, thanks!

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  9. Tough subject to tackle and you did a wonderful job.

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  10. I really enjoyed your narrative, how each of you portrayed the role was very good. The music to your video blends very well with your footage and the use of angles for your shots were very captivating as it is a personal video.

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  11. Nicely done. You touched on a very personal, but yet universal, topic. Good dialogue, too.

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  12. i like how the story is based on your personal life

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